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Coffee eyes rove over cream skin,
Picking up every freckle,
Saving each nuance for later.
Pocketing memories so sweet.

Chocolate fingers whisper softly,
Dancing across tender flesh,
Memorizing the texture of love.
So, I love how I'm writing romantic poetry, despite the fact that I think romance is overrated. Them again, it's from the pov of one of my favorite male characters ever, so that might be why. :meow:

Written for :icongrammar-nazi-united:'s weekly theme - Coffee Eyes.
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Wonderwall33 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2011
This is amazing. I love all the images and textures you brought into this.
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Skuhweer Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much. :tighthug:
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OoRaimaeoO Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2011  Student General Artist
Lovely imagery! I'm with you on romance being overrated and don't usually enjoy romantic lit at all, but this was a breath of fresh air.
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Skuhweer Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :la:
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armymanski Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I love it! So visual.
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Skuhweer Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :3
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KJ-Illustration Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
I absolutely love the imagery ~! :heart: Just beautiful! :floating: :+fav:!
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Skuhweer Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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Caity-Kitten Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2010   Writer
A very modern and well spoken twist of a love poem. Some awesome word choices and metaphors. Great job.
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Skuhweer Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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Caity-Kitten Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2010   Writer
yw
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Dani-the-Naiad Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
featured in my journal
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Skuhweer Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :3
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Dani-the-Naiad Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:) and NOW it's up! :D
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Skuhweer Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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bowie-loon123 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2010  Student Writer
Hi, your wonderful work has been featured here! :)
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Skuhweer Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :tighthug:
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bowie-loon123 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2010  Student Writer
You're welcome! :huggle::heart:
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my-grey-words Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2010
So sweet ^^ I love the references to coffee :)
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Skuhweer Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :3
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CassielTheLostSoul Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2010
I like how descriptive this is, in such a short space
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Skuhweer Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :3
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hitomi-higarashi Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2010
This is a very romantic poem, it's really nice!
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Skuhweer Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :hug:
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